Monday, 3 October 2011
my quote, why i chose it.
Why I chose my quote is because if you dont exercise your mind with a good book it can become unhealthy for your brain to compose stories or to be able to add more words to your vocabulary. If you don't exercise your mind you will not be able to do well in school and you will get a bad mark.
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You have chosen a good quote Dariann. I do not see how this relates to you as a reader specifically. How does reading exercise YOUR mind specifically?
ReplyDeleteWhich books have you read that has caused you to think differently about something?
As a side note, your blog is very busy - perhaps take a critical look at the gadgets you have selected to include here and decide which ones should stay (as they are appropriate for your purpose) and which ones need to be deleted.
Use a capital on "i".
ReplyDeleteIn the first sentence you should take out the word "Why" which is the first word in the sentence and the word "is" because they aren't need to make this sentence complete. I also agree with what Mrs. McConkey had to say, try to relate the quote to how you think as a reader by possibly saying, " For me I feel like if I don't read enough then I feel as if my brain is on sleep mode" or you could say, "I feel like when I read I learn a bunch of new words which helps me to achieve better marks in school." But overall, your blog posts are very well done.
ReplyDeleteI think you have worded this paragraph nicely, but I also agree with Miss McConkey, in that you should talk about how the quote relates to you as a reader. You need to also watch out for comma errors specifically before cordinating conjunctions.
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